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Post by Psycho on Wed Jun 18, 2008 8:40 pm

These are written based off what i felt at the time and things that have happened to me and they are in no specific order.

Dying

A simple design
Follow it through this time
It cant end like this
It wasnít planned like this

The way we saw it
It was so solid
Now its falling apart
And you still have my heart

I beg you
Please donít break it
Why do you hate this
We can make it work

But you insist
Its done with
No more trying
Instead you left me

DyingÖÖ


You

I shy away
Because im so afraid
Just call my name
And end this game

The way I see you
I desperately need you
You keep me alive
You help me strive

But now Iíve lost you
I have to find you
My hearts in two
The other half is with you

I gave it away
Now Iíve gone astray
I see the light
And I take flight

Towards the heavens
I leave this world
I say goodbye
As you cry

Secluded

So secluded
My minds deluded
I need to see you
I want to believe you

But it hard to trust
When you left me here
To ponder what
I need to feel

You broke my heart
You Tore me apart
I look in your eyes
But your dead inside

You want to start
Over again
After all that you did
Just leave me alone

Just go home
I donít want to see you
I will never be you


Hatred

The hatred inside me
The fire that drives me
I will avenge this
Try and contest this

Revenge is bitter sweet
I will knock you off your feet
You wont know what hit you
Donít make this an issue

You knew this would happen
Donít act like you didnít
Now im calling you out
Lets go lets end this

Donít run and hide
Come out and fight
You think im stupid
Im not new to this

Sorrow

Waiting for our sorrow to end
Hoping that our hearts will blend
Coming together to defeat the dark
Using the light no longer apart

A tale of truth told from the heart
The world around us falls apart
We knew this would happen
Right from the start

Me and you will make it through
No one will tell us what to do
A new beginning
We start from scratch

The end is coming
But donít look back


The Beat Of My Heart

The beat of my heart
Is the rhythm we dance to
Here in this place
Iím so lucky to have you

As I hold you near
There forms a single tear
A tear of joy
I could never leave you

Now the outside world
Starts to crumble and fall
But our love still stands tall
It wont shake us

Nothing can break us
We will make it to the end
Hand and hand
Forever in this land


Black and Blue

Black and blue
My hearts been bruised
I have suffered a fatal wound
You did this to me

Iíve been betrayed
I lie here in my pain
You stole my heart
And tore me apart

Now the lights go out
Itís hard to breath
I canít remember anything
But the pain you caused

It stays with me
I canít get away
I live with it everyday
Now I start to fade

And the world turns to grey
I will be remembered on this day
As the one
Who couldnít escape the pain



Home

An untread path
Memories from the past
A messed up mind
Torn Apart from the inside

A placed called home
A heart turned to stone
The end of strife
And another lonely night

You picked me up
Just to throw me down
You think this is a game
But youíve gone insane

You abandoned what you needed
You ended this precious treatment
You shut me out
And shut me down

I was trying to help
And now your by yourself
You feel alone
In this place we us to call home


Contained

Immortal lives
Untold lies
Broken Hearts
No reasons to be apart

You left me here
In the dark
To think about
My distraught

I think about
What Iíve become
An animal
That none can trust

I sit here now
Contained again
Hoping for
My pain to end


This Place

My love is lost
My heart is gone
Iíve forced myself
To move on

You left me here
By myself
With no hope
You took the light

You took my soul
Iíve given up
All control
I leave this place

This empty space
Without you
i start anew


The End

I am focused
On what i am after
The last key
The final chapter

The last blank page
No more disaster
The end has come
No more laughter

I leave you now
For i must go
I say goodbye
But dont lose hope



Angel Of Death


When nothings good
And nothings right
The angel of death
Has taken flight

He soars above
And takes the life
Of the one you love
An unfair price

There he sits
Upon his throne
Looking down
With eyes of stone

He kills for fun
No mercy shown
He rules us all
Till time is gone


Like A Ripple

Like a ripple in the dark
Nothing can heal my broken heart
Like a ripple i fade on
Hoping you
can hear these thoughts

Like a ripple i grow far
Waiting for the approaching shore
Doubting that i'll make it there
I say goodbye to you my dear

You still dont know
what you've done
You have taken my heart
And all my love

I wish we could
Start over again
But now my life
Is at its end

By: me

Heaven On Earth

Take my hand
Follow me
I will guide you
Through these empty streets

We will make it
To the end
Nothing will stop me
I have a plan

Love will take us
To a place
Heaven on earth
Címon lets race

Where we can live
Together and free
You wont have to worry
About anything


By:me
What do you guys think about them?


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Re: Psycho's poetry

Post by Buddeh on Thu Jun 19, 2008 12:37 am

jeez you know what i think bro...10/10 all the way i love the way you put clear emotions into all this. Very Happy some make me sad some happy. thats a good thing lol remember

"and thats the end of my poem"

"Buddy BUDDY BUDDY BUUUDDDDDDYYYY!!!" lmao!!!!
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Post by SoundIsAGhost on Thu Jun 19, 2008 5:53 am

Wow very good, 10/10 Smile
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Re: Psycho's poetry

Post by Psycho on Thu Jun 19, 2008 9:20 am

Thanks ^_^


buddy.......... buddy buddy................................... BUDDY!

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Post by freak on Thu Jun 19, 2008 1:16 pm

nice. those r deep stuff

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Post by Psycho on Thu Jun 19, 2008 8:42 pm

Thank you and i added another one

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Post by SoundIsAGhost on Thu Jun 19, 2008 8:45 pm

I love the new poem, it sounds nice but not too much rhyming
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Post by Psycho on Thu Jun 19, 2008 8:49 pm

Thanks, and i wanted to try something a little different

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Post by SoundIsAGhost on Thu Jun 19, 2008 8:51 pm

Yeah, it is very good, keep it up Smile
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Post by Psycho on Thu Jun 19, 2008 9:35 pm

Thanks ^_^

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Post by SoundIsAGhost on Thu Jun 19, 2008 9:36 pm

I expect a 3 page essay on poetry from you now... just kidding xD.
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Post by Psycho on Thu Jun 19, 2008 9:41 pm

LOL good luck with that =P

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Re: Psycho's poetry

Post by Buddeh on Fri Jun 20, 2008 12:46 pm

good lob bro i like yourpoems 10/10 as always i wish i was as good as you i would try but i dont want to embarrass myself.
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Post by Psycho on Fri Jun 20, 2008 1:15 pm

lol practice makes perfect ^_^

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Post by Commander Sparx on Fri Jun 20, 2008 1:17 pm

Those are awesome as always.
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Post by Psycho on Fri Jun 20, 2008 2:01 pm

Thank you =D

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Post by Buddeh on Fri Jun 20, 2008 4:24 pm

np you know i like your poetry just remember when you are famous...

"the end"
"by me what do yall think?"

" BUDDY BUDDY BUDDY BBBUUUUUUUUDDDDDDDDDYYYY"
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Post by SoundIsAGhost on Fri Jun 20, 2008 8:19 pm

LOL, can you sing? If so you can turn them into songs and make a lot of $$.. XD and give some to me Smile

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Post by Psycho on Fri Jun 20, 2008 11:10 pm

Buddeh wrote:np you know i like your poetry just remember when you are famous...

"the end"
"by me what do yall think?"

" BUDDY BUDDY BUDDY BBBUUUUUUUUDDDDDDDDDYYYY"

lol dont worry i wont forget =P

And i can try to sing but it wouldnt be very good im think about taking singing lessons im already in a band im a drummer ^_^ so it would be cool if i learned to sing.

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Post by Psycho on Sat Jun 21, 2008 2:38 pm

Added another one!

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Post by Buddeh on Sun Jun 22, 2008 3:00 am

Nice i like it you think you could PM me a tut on making poems?
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Post by Psycho on Sun Jun 22, 2008 11:21 am

There aren't really any tutorials just write from your heart and remember it doesn't have to rhyme and the only rules of poetry are your own

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Post by Buddeh on Mon Jun 23, 2008 3:46 am

okay i will start doing that hopefully ill post my FIRST EVER poem here soon.
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Post by Nichole on Mon Jun 23, 2008 1:33 pm

whoa! Dude thats some powerful stuff!!!
Great job Nicholle is jealous and i have had 2 poems published!
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Post by Psycho on Mon Jun 23, 2008 2:54 pm

Im going to try to get published and thanks ^_^

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