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Sara's quick Poetry

Post by SoundIsAGhost on Thu Jun 19, 2008 8:17 pm

I'm not poet, but here's a poem that I just wrote in this thread.

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You think your always right about everything
You never can admit your wrong
Even when I know your wrong I don't speak
I said you were right, yet I knew you were wrong
Now I stare blankly wondering what life would be like if my heart wasn't in two

I tell myself to ignore you
But I know that I adore you
I blast the music so I can't feel
That my wounds haven't quite healed

My head keeps spinning
Needing an answer
It points to you
But I say that it can't be true
There must be something better than you
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Re: Sara's quick Poetry

Post by Psycho on Thu Jun 19, 2008 8:22 pm

Awesome, except the first stanza seemed forced but still great job ^_^

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Post by SoundIsAGhost on Thu Jun 19, 2008 8:25 pm

Thanks, Psycho.
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Re: Sara's quick Poetry

Post by SoundIsAGhost on Fri Jun 20, 2008 11:10 am

Passed Your Grin

Everyone thinks that I can't see
People act like I'm a target that they hit for fun
They say they like me
They say they want to be my friend
These people don't know that I can see passed their sleazy little grins
But I can

I don't know why people hate me
No one cares to tell me what I did
Or what I said
Or how I made them feel how they do
I just have to keep on going
Fighting the curse
Is it jealousy
Or is it even worse

Are people all that clueless
To think I don't see that they don't like me
Do they know I can tell that their love is a lie
Or that I see their want for friendship is impaired

I never no what to say
Should I apologize for nothing
Even if they screwed up
People make me feel like I'm always the one that did shit in the first place
But I'm not the one that was a snitch
No I wasn't
I wasn't even a bitch

So take me like a target
But I can see
How much you've hurt me
How bad it feels
Even before you've done a thing to me

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Re: Sara's quick Poetry

Post by Psycho on Fri Jun 20, 2008 11:51 am

Again it seems a little forced but it is still very great but it makes me sad are you alright sara?

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Re: Sara's quick Poetry

Post by Buddeh on Fri Jun 20, 2008 12:27 pm

i see the first one is directed to Max then the lst one says fuck Max i hate him.
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Re: Sara's quick Poetry

Post by SoundIsAGhost on Fri Jun 20, 2008 1:44 pm

Psycho wrote:Again it seems a little forced but it is still very great but it makes me sad are you alright sara?

Yeah I'm fine.

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